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Rocket to Insanity: Nightmarish Dissatisfaction 1 by seventozen Rocket to Insanity: Nightmarish Dissatisfaction 1 by seventozen
And after a long delay, I present you with... a cliffhanger! Storytime is just around the corner for this comic though. (ooh! Storytime!)
For those of you who might be a little confused, this storytime is where I explain the parts of Dash's horrific nightmares that didn't get explained that well in the original story. Well, at least... it seemed that way to me.

Next page might be quite a lot longer in terms of physical length, simply because I don't want to split the next part into multiple pages. And I also want everything in one place, since this comic is taking a backseat to other, more important things in my life. I'll still be here though, so don't worry!

P.S.: I hate the new D.A. submission page. Not enough room.

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"Mandatory" Legal
MLP by Hasbro and Lauren Faust
Story by Scherzo
Alternate by Sethisto
Adaptation and drawings by Yours Truly
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fotland42 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
Don't be silly, Dashie. She's only friends with an attempted murderer.

I thought you were going to clean her up? She'll feel better when she's not covered in dried blood, you know. And be less of a health hazard (although the drying of the blood has already helped some).
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:iconneospearblade:
#47? Again?

Man, you really needed a betareader back then.

And so begins the explanation. Another set of pages that begs to be voice acted.
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Invader-Logic Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cute. C:
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madjam1231 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Ok using a computer is bad enough (Because I liked the pencil drawings a lot) But USING COMPUTER TEXT?
But I will do like the story it's really good.
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seventozen Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hey. I decided on computer art, and that's what will be produced for the rest of the comic. Sorry if I disappointed you...
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madjam1231 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
It's fine but I do really like the story
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saviourandella Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i cnat wait for the next its such an exciting story!!<3
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Sluttyprince Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
"Drowning in paperless work." XD I use the old submission page still. ^^
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jakamakataka Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
I have two questions:

Question 1: Is that what happens in the real story. I mean I know this is called "alternate ending" but does the actual story has some sort of happy ending or is it just dark and depressing for shock value?

Question 2: I see you'll try to give some more depth to Dash's dream sequence, but...well you are aware that having a simple nightmare is really a small thing to try to murder your friend for. So do you already know what to do to make it believable so the others, who are mighty pissed off, will somehow forgive her? Coz I don't know if I would be able to forgive my friend after they tried to murder my other friend and after I said some horrible things to them, to simply forget about after I heard "I had a bad dream". I mean I don't doubt you can pull it off but this sounds kinda difficult.
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seventozen Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Okay, first, thanks for taking the time to actually ask some questions.

In response to your first: no, this scene, and most of the next ones don't exist in the original alternate ending. This whole page was my invention. The original does incorporate a happy ending, one which I am also going to use, but I'm taking my time to get there. Read the original alternate and you'll see why. (Link on my homepage).

Second, yes: I do know what I'm going to make to explain Dash's dreams, or rather, nightmares. I do feel that the original explanation was woefully lacking in any sort of insanity, or trauma, for that matter. I'm trying to make that more apparent and bring that whole thing to the surface so the act of attempted murder seems more...reasonable. Yeah. Twilight needs some concrete evidence here, especially since MY planned storyline for those two requires some trust... maybe I said too much. :)

Also, sorry for the wall of text. I do that when I'm impassioned.
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krisiskiller101 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is getting so much better. At first i liked it, and now i friggin love it. Brilliant work Seventozen.
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seventozen Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Danke.
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Zakeno Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student Filmographer
Nice panel placement, you're getting better at this!

The coloring goes out of the lines in some places though, notably on the teapot. You might want to be careful and clean that stuff up, the soft lines get a little messy.
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pokewolfravage101 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
aww it was nice for twi to let dashie in :3
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TheHoofedGhostwriter Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student Writer
Finally, some solace for poor RD. I await the next additions!
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EagleSpartan888 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Can't wait for the next part!!! Great work!!! Will there be a part in the future where the rest of the Mane 6 (including Pinkie) forgive Dash?
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seventozen Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yes. But it's pretty far in the future, considering the fact that I keep adding things. :)
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EagleSpartan888 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I see. Understandable. But I'll be anxious for the things in-between!
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touileasaso Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
I just noticed that now you're typing what they say in their speech bubbles instead of writing on it. Do you think it's easier to type it in instead?
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seventozen Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's a little harder, but it looks cleaner, and that's what I wanted.
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panda040 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Yoyoyoyo <3
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matty4z Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
then twi looks at RD sickly and says thats just evil
nive add on ^,^
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Chaosisx Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
The backgrounds are pretty.
And yay storytime!
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ElwisFromPoland Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
I just love how that comic go - from simple color pencils, to digital coloring. :)

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Chrismilesprower Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Oh boy. I'm liking this. Well done work my friend.
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