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Rocket to Insanity: Nightmarish Dissatisfaction 5 by seventozen Rocket to Insanity: Nightmarish Dissatisfaction 5 by seventozen
Hmm. Well. That's new. Read it a few more times to get it.

I learned a few lessons with this page, the first and foremost would be to not confide your secrets in Spike. If he don't understand 'em, he'll blab 'em. And I had planned to give our favorite purple dragon some airtime, seeing as he almost never shows up in any fanfictions, with the exception of the one about him living after Twilight's death. Incredibly sad story. Someone made a comic out of it too. Don't know the title though, so don't ask.

I made some shadows, made some lineart, made some story progression happen in new and exciting ways. Stick around, and comments are appreciated.

Oh, and update: Character Count as of this page:
(How many times I have drawn each one)

Rainbow Dash: 172
Twilight Sparkle: 51
Pinkie Pie: 47
Applejack: 39
Fluttershy: 22
Rarity: 15
Spike: 9 :)

Took that long to get them right.

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MLP by Hasbro and Lauren Faust
Story by Scherzo
Alternate by Sethisto
Adaptation and drawings by Yours Truly
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:iconmlp-candyfilly:
Mlp-CandyFilly Featured By Owner May 10, 2015
Wait…what? :o (Eek) 
Oh boy…here we go
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fotland42 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
I wonder if there's any shipping going on here?

There's plenty of fanfiction prominently featuring Spike. Even two years ago. Two years ago isn't that long ago. The fandom was over two years old by the time you drew this page, and in that time, we produced every type of fanwork in quite considerable quantities. Any time you say "I'm doing X because nobody else does," you're wrong. Guaranteed.

Anyway, I would strongly recommend either a mental health professional or a diversion of this story into Silent Ponyville. Preferably the second one, since it conveniently disposes of her if it doesn't cure her.
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valspan Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
.___.  well, now i know why she had that book.......
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Nbking992 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
Derpy Face explain that reply
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valspan Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uhhhhh...tbh, I dont remember. Maybe I was-no, no that cant be right. Lets just blame this comment on my weird thought process. I kind of want to know what I was thinking too.......muffin?


Muffin Tiem 
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Nbking992 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
Why not?
Yummy :3
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NeoSpearBlade Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
On my first read-through, this page (and especially that last panel) made me a Twilight SparklexRainbow Dash shipper. I now prefer this couple although I don't mind the other pairings they get shipped with.

For a story with gore, blood and nightmarish images, there's a good amount of heartwarming scenes. I like that fact. A lot.
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Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Twilight casts Patronus. It's cutely effective. :)
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PrincessOfDestiny13 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014
Three words. Last panel. Twidash. OTP!!!#1 

Awesome work. 
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watcher25 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
I can say the same about another pony... But I was not that fortunate
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D-ZANY-GOLLUMN Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
O-O I should've seen that coming...
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:iconnessa191:
nessa191 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Let the shipping begin!
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poop556 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Tiny Dashie!
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Pepperjack61 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
And now we have a rainbowsparkle / twidash shipping interesting
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Arashi93-sama Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
unexpected!
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mabiesison Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah you're right Dash can be sometimes a jerk (no offense to the Dash fans)
but she is a god caring loyal friend :)
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FrauleinsPRO Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
"oh wow."

Also, your Spike is chubby-ish.
Is funny to me.

jk, that was better than me drawing spike. if i was drawing spike it would be a stick guy with fangs and a green mohawk.
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seventozen Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I like him chubbier than normal. Makes him look different.

Since you commented on a lot of my older pages, I was entranced by looking at them for the first time in a long while.

They are good... and bad. At least to me.
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DRDERPYDASH101 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
HI I'M NEW TI THIS THIS IS THE BEWT FANFIC I'VE EVER READ NO JOKE
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seventozen Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
So. You just found this comic?

I'm happy that it's the "best fanfic ever" according to you, especially since from this page onward, nothing in the comic really resembles the original stories at all. It's all a one-man adaptation, baby...

It's great to be new to a comic already in progress, is it not? you get to read through, watch the story develop, and OH MY GOD IT ISN'T DONE YET? I HAVE TO WAIT FOR MORE? 

:icontrollface:  Yep. You do.
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Chocolate-thePony Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
spike is drawn so cute.
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seventozen Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks. Y'know, that's the first time I ever drew Spike? He turned out well, even if I do make his arms too long in many panels.
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Chocolate-thePony Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
your welcome. Wow these comics are really good and when it said volience I got scared but I clicked it anyway and it wasn't that bad. 
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SolluxBeeDerpy Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Rainbows are magic shipping name for one and all :D
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meriem2003 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
TWIDASHTWIDASH
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X-NinjaPinkieDash-X Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
TwiDash.


I am okay with this.
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xXIceblastofRCXx Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
TwiDash ftw!!!!
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dragonfufu Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Student Writer
so emmm, The alternative ending is going close to tell about Twilight & Rainbow Dash love? it is great! crossover with creepypasta & TwiDash Shipping :))
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Brozion Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Woah spike I think your going through puberty all over again
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:iconseventozen:
seventozen Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
How so?
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Dishdude87 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
Love =/= Romance. Twilight loves each of her friends for the same reasons they represent the Elements of Harmony, and for their hidden depths as demonstrated in this strip. If you must ship, I hope you keep it mild and keep it subtle. But for now, I want to see how this ends. Twilight's magic construct of Dash looks especially cool. Your art's really getting better as this goes on.
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seventozen Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is another plot point that I'm not sure about how I'm going to produce it. It's either love as a friend, or something deeper. Like the entire storyline of this comic, the outcome changes on a daily basis, since this is the only version of this particular sorry out there.
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krisiskiller101 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's awesome man. These are just getting better.
PS: When you arrive in Rapture, make sure not to become a splicer. Your art skills may diminish when you are craving plasmids.
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seventozen Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yeah. Although being a spider splicer might be kind of neat. Climbing on walls and such.
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krisiskiller101 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Or a Houdini splicer. Now THAT would be cool.
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xVeraIsMaiNameLulz Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Artist
Love as a friend :D?
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touileasaso Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
What a coincidence! I just finished that game!

And it`s good to see Spike get some airtime.
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Patec Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
sigh... another story with potential ruined by shipping.
And here I thought it would be something different this time.
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seventozen Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Well, sorry if I didn't quite meet your expectations. If it makes you feel any better, this goes under the category of mild shipping, but I guess that's too much. Sincerely hope you're trolling me.
-Seventozen
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Patec Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
No, I'm actually not.
ok, maybe "ruined" was too harsh.
But to me it seems like in too many stories every time one of the ponies does anything for another one (saving her life, helping her in a bad situation, being there for her etc.) it's only because of one reason: a secret love for her.

It's almost like friendship means nothing, it always HAS to be love. Because obviously friends don't help each other, only lovers do.
But that's not what the show teaches us at all.

But again, I didn't wanna sound harsh. I just thought this was a story without romance involved and i was surprised when i saw that part.
Sorry.
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seventozen Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh alright,I get where you're coming from. And I do understand that there are a lot of shipping stories out there, where it can become somewhat monotonous.I had toyed with the idea of this sort of thing for a while, but it was just now that I made it a reality. Sorry off I responded harshly, but I spend a lot of time on these pages and I don't want the story just splashed back in my face. I'm sure you understand.

Hope the comic is still entertaining to you though.
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Patec Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
of course I do. And I also understand that my opinion is not more than that, my opinion. There are many fans of this kind of stories out there.
I liked this story a lot so far and of course I'll continue reading it.
Sorry if i ever sounded cocky or something.
That was not my intention.
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invader-gir1 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
on the 9th panel spikes arms are a bit long...but AWESOME comic anyway! :3
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seventozen Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Spaghetti arms, yeah I know. Thanks though!
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riolufan123 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
YAY a bit a twidash in it!![link]
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TheHoofedGhostwriter Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Writer
BY Celestia!

Plot twist!

Wonderful addition, Sev. Just keep doing what your doing!
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seventozen Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! I will.
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MaQuasi Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student General Artist
"Goin' down to Rapture, the best little town at the bottom of the deep blue sea."

*Security Bot whistle* OH F**K NO.
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seventozen Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Luckily I can afford a bot shutdown station. :)
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BEZthePEZ Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol shipping
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